Some people believe that teenagers are facing more problems in their life than they did in the past and this is because parents are spending more time at work than at home.
Do you agree or disagree?
Teenagers are exposed difficult times than their parents faced in the past and the primary reason for this problem is considered to be parents not able to spend more time with their teens.In my opinion, parents need to spend more time with them mentoring and guiding them to become responsible adults’ tomorrows.
Due westernization, nuclear families are norm of the day, where teenagers yearn to be their parents and don’t have their time and attention. Often, deserted youths are adversely diverted to immoral activities like drug addiction, depressions, crime.Growing up these teenagers are having physical changes and are also exposed to emotional ups and downs. They look up to the family as a source of emotional care and support in their difficult times.Furthermore, as a result of easy access to unfiltered adult content, youngster get immoral and adult information at a click of few buttons using technology. Parental mentoring and supervision become all the more imperative to train such adolescents to not get misguided. Supportive and close family relationships protects these children from risky behavior like alcohol and other drug use, and problems like depression.Family support and interest in what they are doing at school can boost their desire to do well academically too.
However, with rising prices and needs of the family, pressurized both the parents to stay longer hours at workplace to maintain their jobs and take up more assignments.Also, teenagers don’t like overbearing parents, which ruins harmony of the family and is source of constant conflict in the home.Sometimes, youngsters are rebellious and due to their hormonal changes undertake risky actions, for which parents cannot be held responsible.
In conclusion, mothers and fathers, in principal, do owe a primary responsibility to foster healthy relationship with their children for their mental wellbeing, albeit, they cannot be control all the actions of their young children. A well- balanced relationship, can help the teenager to be at ease with parents and have a healthy relationship with their adolescent children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49848024316 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15145537703 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.9576810016 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.0 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5555555556 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275327707823 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111474844473 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076201680901 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176062704502 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781078610265 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.