Some people believe that wild birds or animals should be forced out of the city, while others think they should be kept in the city. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The is a little room for doubts about where wild birds and animals should live . It is claimed by some that they should be outside of a city, while others believe that an urban area will be more beneficial for them. From my perspective, I subscribe to the proposition that a small proportion should be in the zoos in the city, however, the greatest part of animals, birds must survive in wild rural locations .
On the one hand, it is undeniable fact that having more the wild population can impose a heave pressure on the economy and society as more population in the city require more the government's financial expenditure. Firstly, wild animals, birds are dangerous to human beings, so the authority's government should construct special protected areas which afford people to avoid any direct contact with wild animals and birds. So, by constructing restrictions to prevent wild animals to be mixed areas, a build industry will be overloaded , hence people will suffer due to the lack of housing for young generation. Secondly, if fauna in the city has a major scale, it will induce stress of people, as a result, numerous people will suffer from disease in resulting in an increase in the demands for developing medical healthcare. As a result, the greatest proportion of people will move to live far away from this city. Therefore, by keeping fauna in the city, building issues and spreading of disease will be in progress, giving rise to a complicated economical position in the city.
On the other hand, firstly, animals will not lose their hunting habits, if they will live in the wild forest. It is significant to have ability to acquire food, to defend their offsprings from other predators. Secondly, compared to living in the city, animals will not receive some help to survive as people are far away from the wild regions.
In conclusion, if animals and birds are in the city, citizens will have some problem wich concern habitation for young people, also it will cause the increase developing of diseases. If animals and birds live in the forest, they will not eliminate hunting habits, however people cannot enough to aid them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90384615385 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60764224028 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497252747253 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9437353191 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310867394585 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123848645462 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081005024841 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215631530387 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990718647039 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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