Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work.
Which do you think is the best way to choose a career?
Career is everyone's priority always in life. People choose their career based on either the social status, power and salary that will come with it. some decides this future path to fully enjoy and embrace the work they are going to do everyday. I think both the choices deserves their own admiration which I will elaborate further.
Society has created a boundary where the pedestal to be on top is what they consider a great decision for the drive to the destination. Firstly, a person can be noticed when his career option provides him with the luxury, authority and the figures he has in his bank account. I think all of us dream of a path where we get all of these in a minimum time and if possible keep it going forever and ever.
so, a pupil makes his/her goals thinking about this reality all the time.
Although some belief in different approach to work options as they belief that their career is like their love life which should always remain smooth and adventurous. In a way they consider the mental piece in career more important than success. As, they want to acquire all the knowledge in their career to further it. Secondly, they live for the fun of the moment so they choose options like sports, acting and drama as they enjoy the thrill they receive all the time from their work.
In my opinion, some choose their career to be more corporately and financially successful and others think about their work not just a ladder to power but a regular activity to pleasure themselves all the time.
To conclude this, career is anyone's personal decision to make whether for the money-mindedness or their social satisfaction, but for some it is their hobby and passion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d embrace the work they are going to do everyday. I think both the choices deserves thei...
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Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: FOREVER_AND_EVER[1]
Message: Use simply 'forever'.
Suggestion: forever
...imum time and if possible keep it going forever and ever. so, a pupil makes his/her goals thin...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...sible keep it going forever and ever. so, a pupil makes his/her goals thinking a...
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: BELIEF_BELIEVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believe' (verb) instead of belief (noun)?
Suggestion: believe
...ferent approach to work options as they belief that their career is like their love li...
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Line 4, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in career more important than success. As, they want to acquire all the knowledge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6734006734 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40821488189 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6971508066 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317756668997 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11325177077 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779579445604 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158869976366 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115993108556 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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