Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, every individual wants to purchase products or services at optimum rate. Some ethnic groups believe that price is the most important factor while choosing product and or services, while others consider the qualities and attributes also. I completely disagreed with given notion as there are couple of other things to consider like post sale services and guarantee or warranty of purchased product or services.

Nowadays, many of the people are focusing on price tags without considering products’ and services’ post sale support. Many of the today’s companies keep lowering their products’ price to lure more customers but unable to provide after sales support. Those people would repent when product or service get malfunctioned. For example, Reliance Jio had offered very affordable internet services just to crack market and lure the customers. After a few month customers experienced call dropping and other internet related issues. Most customers had been chosen their previous network operators in order to get better services.

Many of the cheaper products are available in the market today, but if one can contemplate its guarantee or warranty they might get discouraged. All the inexpensive products have no specific replacement or repair options. Additionally, those products often have asterisk sign, if one wants to avail extra services such as insurance. For example, Chinese electronics appliances are available at half of the price than other branded products. Even if, manufactures offers some guarantee or warranty options on product, they often have some restrictions like product has to be insured under the enlisted insurance companies.

To conclude, I reiterate that one should look for after sales support or services if they are subscribing to services or ensure guarantee, warranty without any conditions. I also would like to advise that only stable market players are availing aforementioned options for their patrons, new market entrants are only deceiving people by selling their product or services at unbelievable rates.

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Average: 8.8 (3 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s consider the qualities and attributes also. I completely disagreed with given noti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, as to, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6144200627 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91167394242 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58934169279 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2944835904 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220297401212 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751467977133 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536169836301 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135157333012 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501821739314 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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