Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Nowadays, the influence of entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians, sports stars etcetera has increased on the public. This, in turn, also raises a controversy related to their wages. Where some people think that they are highly paid, others; akin to my view, are not in accord to it.
To begin with my viewpoint, I would state that the film stars and musicians deserve the amount of money they are paid and there are various reasons to support this. The first and foremost reason that tops the list is that movie stars and other famous celebrities work day and night to achieve stardom that they have. Adding more to this point, the celebrities also give up spending time with their families as they have to spend days or weeks and sometimes even months away from their loved ones. Not only that, but musicians have to, at times, travel from location to another, without getting a chance to sleep for even two to three hours, for their concerts. For instance, famous band One Direction spent the year 2015 touring the world and did not get to meet their families for an entire year.
Furthermore, back to back projects, meets and greets and other special events give them less privacy to live a carefree life. They are under the eyes of paparazzi, for twenty four hours a day which, for any person can be really hard to manage. Along with that, they do not only work in movies or play matches however, they also take up endorsing advertisements and multi-task as much as possible which gives them another reason to earn high salaries.
However, there are some other jobs which can be considered for higher payment slab. Profession of doctors, for instance, is not a small task. Doctors help save many people’s lives and also assist in bringing new lives into the world. Doctors are the ones who have the ability to turn the tables of one’s life and thus, their job should not be taken lightly. Another job, which is highly important, is that of teachers and researchers. These are the people who have the ability to make or break the careers and the future of one too many.
Therefore, I would conclude that no job is unworthy of what the person receives and people should focus not on what the stars get but on what all the stars do for their fans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
... the list is that movie stars and other famous celebrities work day and night to achieve stardom t...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
...ey are under the eyes of paparazzi, for twenty four hours a day which, for any person can b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66253101737 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28879640738 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5682382134 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9722881355 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.388888889 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234167576393 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706395881691 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627835077286 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130461350163 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544848222915 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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