Some people feel that the responsibility for providing education should be borne only by the government and that private education should be banned. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Administering the value of education to one's life has been an important possession no one could ever take. However, some people argue that privately owned schools should be totally replaced with government funded universities. In this light, several factors are now considered targeting the pro and cons of the proposed argument.
The stare provides basic needs for its people which are mainly for health, safety and most especially for education. Public schools are rampant in such a way to accommodate thousands of students whose families could hardly afford to pay fees. In effect, most parents would prefer sending their children in colleges owned by the government to lessen their burden on finances seeing that public institutional learning mostly provide free tuition fees.
On the other hand, may would agree that the quality if education private academies can offer could be practical, considering that learning resources are much more evident there. To illustrate this, numerous of successful professionals today studied from private schools and one cannot deny the fact that these institutions produces a well-rounded and universally competent individuals. Furthermore, the upper class families would opt to choose a more conducive for learning environment for their children. Some people suggest that it is better to have a smaller number of students in one room to enhance the learning capacities for students, enabling them to enhance more understanding and concentration on the subject matter.
With the above-mentioned reasons, it is my belief that availability of both sectors would be the best course of action to consider as of the moment. Seeing that every family regardless of economic status have a free will to choose where would they hand down the future success and development of their children.
To sum up, the highest quality of education people could ever achieve will all depends on themselves. Wherever learning institutions they may be still, it would make them a better person. Perhaps, it is what schools were expected to teach them after all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...Administering the value of education to ones life has been an important possession n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, well, after all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37195121951 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84334047705 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606707317073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7201147077 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.466666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194261403388 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607389380819 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061985600045 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102033049315 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434879032606 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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