Some people prefer cold weather conditions while other don’t discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people prefer cold weather conditions while other don’t discuss both the view and give your opinion.

People always have their own priorities about their lifestyles. Some people prefer cold climatic condition while other prioritise worm weather to thrive. Both these environment has its own pros and cons which I discussed in following paragraphs.

Cold weathers usually considered as pollution free environment because pollution causes heat. Secondly, some people believe that
they can live healthy lifestyle in cold weather. In fact, cold climate increases one’s digestive power and due to that they can consume more foods which could have relation with living health and strong lifestyle.For example, Canadians do believe that their country has pleasant environment due to the coldness. They also believe in consuming good healthy food which their climate is supporting. Because of their lifestyle they live longer and stronger compared to other hot climatic countries’ citizens.

However, some people also consider the advantages of living in hot or warm regions. These type of whether generally have abundant sun shine thus, agriculture business flourish as per localites needs. Additionally, many others life forms and ecosystem can survive in warm weather so, people can enjoy different type of ecosytems via national parks and zoos. For instance, India is the diverse country, it has warm weather thus, people also depend mostly on agricultural business because of enough sunlight. There are also several national park and zoos available to enjoy good times with their family and friends.

To recapitulate, I prefer to live in warm climate which is not scorching hot. Warm climate would have all the four seasons at particular pre-defined year time so, I can enjoy all sort of weathers. As per my view warm weather brings variety of occasions so people can enjoy seasons and seasonal foods too.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this environment' or 'these environments'?
Suggestion: this environment; these environments
...prioritise worm weather to thrive. Both these environment has its own pros and cons which I discu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heat. Secondly, some people believe that they can live healthy lifestyle in cold ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...with living health and strong lifestyle.For example, Canadians do believe that thei...
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Line 6, column 220, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...per localites needs. Additionally, many others life forms and ecosystem can survive in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in fact, sort of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43816254417 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67513337487 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5911405205 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217461493316 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805439814098 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968274211894 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134867530392 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851970933357 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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