Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, online grocery shopping gaining popularity and they includes supermarkets also. Many people in society prefers to buy grocery online, on other hand few still follow the traditional way of shopping by visiting the supermarket. This essay will discuss why online shopping has its own benefits but why conventional way of shopping is more superior.
In modern days, many people choosing shop online as an efficient and suitable way to save the time from their hectic lifestyle. A person can just login through an application and have food delivered at their desired place within a very short period.As an example, a major supermarket like gofers and food bazaar promises to deliver fresh and good grocery within four hours at consumer’s doorstep. Hence, online shopping of food material saves time from busy schedule. As a result of this customers are easily getting stuff whenever the want.
But it’s not everyone’s necessity to save time and visiting supermarket can in fact be an extremely pleasurable experience. Taking round through the market allows one to select from vast group of a single product and to decide what exactly goes into the basket. For an instance, think about the variety of vegetables are available at the market and people can enjoy while selecting good quality and healthy from a big lot and also people can spend their leisure time in shopping. If you have time, I must say that supermarket gives an extremely positive experience of shopping.
By launching different ways of online shopping of grocery, traditional routines are being challenged. This essay discussed why online purchasing of foodstuff can be an efficient and convenient way but why shopping at shopping mall personally gives an extremely positive experience. In my opinion, visiting supermarket offers an immensely great experience and not online shopping.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, while, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91475873583 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0182741837 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221226416259 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792839734992 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803579321104 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146097217702 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087722878172 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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