Advertisements have existed for a long time as a way for business companies to introduce their merchandise. Some people believe that advertising has succeed in convincing customer to purchase things while others said that their regular appearances make people tend to neglect about it. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and also illustrate my personal perspective.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that these advertisements always offer us good reasons to choose them which motivate customer believe these items meet their demands. Therefore, the customer unhesitatingly make purchases without deliberating whether these things are really useful.
For instance, customers who always look for any shopping discounts would feel interested in advertisements offer them significant discounts only for a short time which persuade them to take the chances to buy things on the spot.
On the other hand, commonly advertising may create reverse effects as it appear too usual that people tend to put it aside whenever they come across it. The persistent duplication of advertisements may be a pain in the neck of some people or its frequent appearance make people feel it so boring. Therefore, they would choose to skip any advertisements if they see them. Take Youtube advertisement as an example, the app put the advertisement before the video but a majority viewer tend to click on “Skip ads” instead of watching all the advertisement as it is really irritated.
In my opinion, I agree with both these views. Advertising can be either interesting or annoying, which strongly depends on its frequent existence and customer demands. Some extents,the companies attempt to display advertisements as frequent as possible, which may lead to unexpected drawbacks.
In conclusion, advertising may succeed in persuading people to purchase these merchandise or services, or may be unsuccessful in many ways. Thus, advertisements should be designed and displayed in the correct ways to result in the highest effectiveness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40694006309 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16642882949 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2005649684 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.266666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290115023095 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100556522025 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476374415088 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145286232332 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521973220391 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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