Today, landing an appropriate job is so demanding. It requires not only educational qualification but also some personal skills such as problem-solving. This is definitely on educational systems’ shoulder to provide these qualities for pupils. It is believed that schools in all degrees focus on theoretical aspects and do not allot adequate time on practical aspects of learning. This will be proven in this essay.
Firstly, in many countries learning facts, has more priority over practical courses in schools. however, people are able to acquire them on the push of a button via Internet. But, many skills, such as working with laboratory equipment, which can be learned only in educational environments are neglected. Employers always are expressing their dissatisfaction with job seekers’ weak ability for doing this sort of jobs. They have to teach these skills to any newly joint members. As this example shows educational systems are not design to signify practical aspects of subjects to pupils.
In addition to this, lack of creativity and problem-solving skills of adults in workplaces lead firms to contract with consulting organizations in an attempt to solve their internal difficulties, even where they employ highly educated candidates. This is due to the fact that during educational years students have not exposed to tangible problems to solve them. They only were taught about formulas and factual terms.
Followings this look, I agree with the concept of existence more than enough theoretical subjects in students’ curriculum rather than practical courses. It is hoped education plan of school will be revised in favor of meeting students’ needs in the future in workplaces.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...rity over practical courses in schools. however, people are able to acquire them on the...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
...l environments are neglected. Employers always are expressing their dissatisfaction with j...
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Line 2, column 486, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hese skills to any newly joint members. As this example shows educational systems ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, in addition, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47744360902 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12860567044 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9232498409 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108974897025 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333583816833 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038396784127 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064290290654 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317492258033 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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