Thanks to globalization and technology advancement, international sporting events such as Olympics have the biggest fan following. Although some feel that these events are not important for this century, I, however, believe that it is very essential for two main reasons.
Firstly, it is a place where talented people showcase their talents. Many players work dedicatedly to get qualified for Olympics as it provides them worldwide recognition. For instance, an Indian wrestler named Yogeshwar, who came in limelight after becoming a gold medalist in Olympics 2012. Similarly, James Boult, South African racer, got a huge fan following after his breath-taking performance in the final match in Olympics 2007. So, these sporting events are the places which motivate players to work hard as it makes them a celebrity.
Another reason is the cultural diversity. During the match, people of different countries often sit together which gives them an opportunity to come to know about each other lifestyles. Moreover, these international games support middle or small scale businessmen to increase their income. For example, small scale companies get a chance to sell their handmade products to spectators. Hence, not only are Olympics a way of cultural exchange, but it also allows them to earn more.
In conclusion, not only does Olympics provide a new place to the players to showcase their talent to a wider audience, but it also helps the host country to stimulate their economy by boosting small level business. Therefore, I believe that international sports events are essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39759036145 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88186682004 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642570281124 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7743917233 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893706499881 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285466682814 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214202788957 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537458267659 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227610674136 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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