Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although some people believe that it is government's duty to take care of the environment, others think that every human being ought to be responsible for it. In my opinion, I think each person should take responsibility to take care of the biosphere for the betterment of everybody's future.
On the one hand, some people think that state and central authorities ought to take care of the environment. They point to the fact that individual's effort cannot make a gigantic difference and it is the government who needs to carry out or make big decisions, which can help to save the environment. For instance, the decision to ban old diesel cars which emit too much of carbon emission and cause pollution is in the hands of the government; therefore, they are in a better position to take big steps for the betterment of nature.
On the other hand, some people think that if every human being starts taking small efforts it can make a gigantic difference. They believe that the government is responsible for big tasks but if people resort in taking care by doing a few tiny things differently it can make a huge difference. For example, if people avoid purchasing products with excess packaging, it will force suppliers to resort to less plastic packaging, thereby reducing pollution. As a result, a small decision of human beings can help in controlling the pollution caused by non-biodegradable waste; thus, saving mother nature.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think people's small effort is more significant in saving the environment. If all human beings make few positive changes in favor of protecting the biosphere, it can not only help to reduce pollution and save the environment, but also leads to more unity in people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...nvironment. They point to the fact that individuals effort cannot make a gigantic differenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92929292929 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86234895259 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508417508418 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.2026048981 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.090909091 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218350528286 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974769930571 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840946686536 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149819092266 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834581199875 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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