Some people say that when children under 18 are committing a crime they should be punished, while others believe they should be educated. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.
Juvenile crime has been an outstanding issue through recent years. Although some people may be in favor of punishing the offender straightaway, regardless of the age of the criminal, I believe that youngsters would better experience alternative measurements to be deterred from committing crime in the future.
First of all, I personally don't perceive penalties could be effective in case of adolescents, since they are most likely to have broken the law unknowingly. The young or even adult people are not aware of all legislations at some points. Similarly, they might have committed the crime under a wicked friend's influence and unwillingly. Therefore, prison sentences or other kinds of punishment, not only would not be able to make underage criminals turn their lives over, but also may give them the opportunity to meet other defenders and become familiar to other types of crime.
Furthermore, placing young people who have committed crime in educational environments would take them away from corrupted situations as well as help them to change their lives for better. The educational environment is not restricted to schools or universities, necessarily. One way to educate juvenile criminals could be to force them to have a relevant job to their crime. For example, if they have shoplifted, they would be employed as a shop security. Under secretly supervision, though. This situation would help them to improve their personality and enhance their self-confidence.
In conclusion, even though some people would fear punishments and find them deterrent from acting against laws, young people would need education to be stopped from being a law-breaker rather than penalties.
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38721804511 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03356438222 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0815982845 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216081845902 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786336984583 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508329893348 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13958828853 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340829943145 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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