Recently, the phenomenon of the opinion that each family should have only one car and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that using personal car can be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly destroyer and negative by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that using public vehicles can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support encouraging people to travel with alternative transportation. At first, traveling by personal car is faster and more convenient for most people. However, if everyone use their cars to reach their jobs it can be the cause of many disorders in the city. For example, many people waste their times in the crowded streets and highways due to they do not interested to travel by train or bus.
In addition, many people avoided standing in a straight line for bus or Metro that is inconvenient for them that using the personal car. But, crowded avenues and highways is the main reason of environmental problems such as air pollution. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2017 has shown that the main cause of the climate change in around the world is the gas emission by cars.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this viewpoint, I profoundly believe that the despite all difficulties with traveling with public transportation, the benefits of alternative vehicles are far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12992125984 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96444144416 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.612996553 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.454545455 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149444965787 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550865247121 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654386795119 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774950068127 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478815718414 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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