Art as a subject in school has been arguable topic. While one portion of the world population believes art as a subject is just wastage of time, others consider it as vital portion of human generation. In this essay, first I will show how modern technologies are replacing art, then will show how art helps children and finally present a reasonable conclusion.
Modern technology has become indivisible part of the human life thus life devoid of the same is unimaginable. For instance, computer literacy has become essential for everyone, and one who does not know how to handle computer is considered as illiterate. Due to this modernization, some argue that children should be taught technology related subject as they can help them for their career growth and earnings and are thereby of the opinion that traditional subjects like art are only wastage of time which are worth to be replaced by technology related subjects.
On the flip side, art has been one of the primitive ways of communication and importance of it is undeniable in solving the mysteries of human history; even now it is seen as a medium of expressing feelings, specifically for children. For instance, a child who always prefers its comfort zone can express it’s feelings by means of painting. Apart from this, in this era of competition, while stress seems to be indivisible part of human race, arts can act as a way to release stress. To illustrate, music therapy nowadays is acknowledged to cure depression at remarkable level. In addition to this, arts like dancing keeps child not only fit but also healthy.
To conclude, although arts subjects are essential for overall growth of a person, modern technology related subjects like science and mathematics are necessary for career growth. In my opinion/To opine, although children should be taught all the subjects in primary education, they should be enabled to select subject of their choice in secondary education.
Nowadays , all the children…
Nowadays , all the children in the world go to school , the education of each country is different but all of them are knowledge . Although that , some parents still think art is a "waste of time" subject while others say it is an essential lesson . So I will discuss both sides and give my own opinion.
In this modern world art isn't a popular job , all parents always want to orientation their kids to work on business , technology , doctor , ... and art is not a job where people can make money . To do this job , kids have to have talent when they were young and must learn this from very soon
. At school , the teacher doesn't teach all the knowledge about art so all the kids got talent have to learn at school that depth about art or come to art center.That is the reasons why parents think that learn art in school is a waste of time.
In the other hand , we have to know that art is including
music , painting , drawing . All this skill is very necessary for your life . At details art will help you get better in your creative , imagination , it also improve your performance , make you more confident . In a work environment , show yourself and make friends is very important , music can help by the performance in every party . As a results , art will help you create a social relations.
For me , I'm not going to go on an artistic work so it not very appropriate with me but I still need these skills in my life . It helps me make friends , make me more confident and more than that art help me make my life easier.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262711864407 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0932203389831 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045197740113 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0310734463277 0.0437548338989 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149717514124 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0508474576271 0.0403226058552 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84292472273 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282485875706 0.0326793684256 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0593220338983 0.0861772015684 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225988700565 0.021408717616 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0169491525424 0.011925033212 142% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1960.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08695652174 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385093167702 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.298136645963 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208074534161 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139751552795 0.137316102897 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84292472273 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 59.6311998728 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7692307692 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1567976809 49.517814964 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.769230769 127.492653851 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 0.814263465372 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 54.5828953655 49.1944974215 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.90697674419 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251700020453 0.332605444948 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0888984678386 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0412988928558 0.0668466124924 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517461784668 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135289983341 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977344369089 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578132388421 0.0742795772207 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.283766474185 0.324371583561 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.049773210449 0.0638462369009 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169612414808 0.228012699653 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453885408987 0.058150111329 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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