Nowadays, the numbers of crimes are increased than earlier and people have different views to punish them. Although some feel that few offenders must allow doing voluntary work, I, however, believe that the types of crime and circumstances of a criminal must be considered before reaching to any verdict.
Firstly, those who commit minor crimes should not put behind the bars. Children sometimes do shoplifting and pickpocketing under the influence of bad company and without knowing the consequences. I think that these minor crimes are not strong enough to send an offender in the prison. In addition, by allowing them to do unpaid work, street criminals will have one chance to correct their wrongdoings.
Secondly, the circumstances under which a crime is committed must be taken into consideration. Many people often commit crimes due to their poor family condition. If someone has committed any crime for the sake of their family, then the offender must allow doing unpaid work as it will not only give him the satisfaction and fulfillment but can also help him to get some work later on.
However, despite the arguments above, those who are either committing crimes repeatedly or doing major crimes should put behind bars. Serious criminals often do hijacking, kidnapping and other crimes to earn money in less time, without the fear of jury system, so serious punishments are required for such cases. A good illustration of this is Russia, where the jury system has the death penalty for murderers and rapists. Due to these punishments, criminals think twice before indulging in any wrong activity.
In conclusion, I believe that minor criminals should allow doing some unpaid work for the community as perhaps it will prevent them from vulnerable activities. Also, I feel that judges should sentence prison imprisonment to serious criminals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23745819398 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72459708363 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6141303643 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248023170297 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823770957793 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531457023359 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148834086924 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367218056749 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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