It is often debated that school children should be studying their favorite subjects instead of studying all the subjects at least till the age of ten. A recent study shows that in 70% countries, students ought to learn the mandatory subjects irrespective of their choice till they go to their mid-grade classes at the age of 12. In my opinion, children must study all the subjects in school to have an elementary knowledge on all subjects. This can be proved by the following essay.
Firstly, children start school at the age of five and they need at least six years of formal education that contains all subjects like mathematics, science, social studies. This will not only precursor them to have a basic understanding of the subject but also enables them to use it when needed. For example, a person may not like math subject however he wants to know the rudimentary arithmetic operations for his livelihood. Hence it is important for a child to know the basic of all subjects for his livelihood.
On the same vein, they are extremely young to choose their choice of subject and hence their selection may be go mistaken. Parents may not be competent to advise them on the subjects they choose. Therefore, the decision of the children may go wrong. Additionally, children are more interested in games rather than studies in their young age. They will have an obvious distraction in choosing the subject. For instance, if we give the choice of selection to the children, about 80% of the students select Sports subject as their main course.
All things considered, we have to give the freedom of selecting the subject once they attain their teen age and all the subjects should be made mandatory until the age of ten. I hope students leverage this kind of strategy for their betterment in their academic education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ithmetic operations for his livelihood. Hence it is important for a child to know the...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: teenage
...ting the subject once they attain their teen age and all the subjects should be made man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85576923077 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.634730408 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50641025641 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9206374445 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351766630338 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129222454596 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904698598671 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238617929119 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514191225797 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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