Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give the reason and relevant examples.
Sports that involve risk to life or that can cause serious injuries is the bone of contention for long. Some sections of the society believe that such sports should be prohibited while some don't even blink an eye for it. Although, it seems wise to ban dangerous/contact sports but this essay will explain why it is not in the best of interests for some individuals.
To embark upon, it seems to be prudent to stop dangerous sporting activities because of the number of lives that are lost while indulging in such activities. Moreover, the fad of participating in risky sports is on an increase among youngsters now a days. In either case, a person involved in such sports dies or is bound to a wheel chair. Physical pain and struggle is just the tip of an iceberg. What lies beneath, is extreme mental trauma and social stigma. To rub salt on the wounds, family is the worst affected in this case. Pressure of heavy medical expenditure and rejection of insurance push a lot of people beneath poverty line. For instance, a survey conducted by European Union governing body for sports showed shocking statistic. At least 40% of the high altitude skiers, mountaineers and bungee jumpers, though small in number, are seriously injured crippling them for life. And, 20% of them, die a painful death. Those who survive have declared themselves bankrupt & are taken care by the government subsidies or grants.
On the other hand, the number of such people discussed in the example previously are merely handful. Though, each and every life is important, but, people who involve themselves in extreme and dangerous sports are mature and have already reached a legal age. In a free society, individuals are independent enough to take their decisions themselves , and, stand responsible for the consequences. So, ultimately it boils down to each person's choice or interest. Thrill and excitement is the ultimate goal they achieve by performing such sports. Definitely, there is a huge amount of risk involved but so does driving on the road or highway. For example, according to a study the largest killer in this world is not extreme sports but driving your favorite car on the highway. So, would you ban it? Definitely Not!
In conclusion, it clearly shows that hazardous sports does leave people in agony & many lose their lives. But, I agree to the fact that it is a matter of choice and personal decision that people make and hence such sporting activities should not be prohibited or stopped.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91232227488 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68869631779 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590047393365 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7044196864 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163874409337 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405655987899 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447470431153 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113082087759 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401288408789 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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