Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody,
regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to
retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
It might seem unfair to some people to set same retirement age for everybody despite working in different profession.
They are of the view that it is the right of some workers to retire and get person at an early age. I strongly believe
that retirement age should vary for different professions.
To begin with, there are people who believe that all humans work and dedicate their time to profession in one way or
other, therefore every worker should retire at the same age of other workers. For example, according to the medical
science, an average human can be mentally and physically fit upto 60 years of age.
On the other hand, some people opine to setting of retirement age according to the professions. In their view, some
jobs demand more energy as compared to others which affects the health of a person both physically and mentally and
are prone to some serious health issues in case of working at old age. For instance, a worker working in oil fields
need to work for longer hours than a normal person working in offices and also, is exposed to toxic gases which are
hazardous to their health, hence probablity of getting infections.
Anyhow, the type of workers to be considered for early retirement should be limited in order for justice to prevail.
In my opinion, people working in military and in fields should be given an early retirement and pension because
people of these occupations sacrifice their family life and health for their country.
In conclusion, to create a just system in the society it is pertinent to set retirement age depending on the nature
of the work a person is involved throughout his life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89436619718 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54512926968 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517605633803 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7031549053 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314681469675 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14658404738 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591788472835 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110505508739 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791889682061 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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