Some people consider that governments set a retirement age (such as sixty-five)
for all of their citizens without concerning the career is prejudicial. Therefore,
they think it should be more flexible with exemptions for certain occupations. I
completely agree with this assertion.
To begin with, there is a variety of reasons why many people think that setting a
retirement age regardless of job categories is unfair. Firstly, it is obvious/
undeniable that many occupations necessitate extreme physical and mental
activities to achieve certain goals. This could make them nearly exhausted before
reaching that age. For example, welders or coal miners could find it difficult to do
hard works when they are older. Secondly, as some senior people stay in their
high position for a long time in the company, it might limit the opportunities for
young people who are full of energy and creativity. These people always want to
show off their ability to gain the company recognition and climb higher in their
career ladder.
I strongly believe that in some certain occupations, workers deserve to retire and
get a pension at an earlier age. Especially those who are working in physically
demanding conditions or in high stressful positions should be in early retirement
group. This is because their health issues/ problems might not allow them to
follow the work, such as construction workers or emergency medical
practitioners. Furthermore, in order to gain the fairest arrangement for every
occupation, the earlier pension that they receive must be calculated based on their
contribution to the society.
In conclusion, it seems to me that a fixed retirement age without categorizing the
jobs is unfair and workers in certain careers have a right to receive an earlier
pension based on their contribution.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39446366782 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92047262116 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5340003178 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388422393191 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122849434113 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112018429983 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914223555935 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820779323952 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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