Some people think that higher institutions should concentration more on academic subjects such as history and the physical sciences, while others think that they should concentrate more on practical subjects such as car mechanics and cookery, etc.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Over the past two or three decades, the way of education is steady as compare to international education. few people believe that secondary school should attentiveness much on therotical subjects, while others believe that they should concentrate on practical subjects. In this essay i will discuss both the views, i believe that both required to be balanced for upbringing of their career. As it plays a vital role in the future life.
On the one hand, there are several oppurtunities for the teens to choose their career in their required field, when they gain knowledge in their early days on the therotical subjects such as history and the physical sciences, they can try to attempt in the reputated field. such as Group-I services like IAS, IPS and ifs in addition to Group-II services like Gazetted. For instance, some people who have the vast knowledge in therotical and they have settled in their life and also they have designated superior requirements, such as cars, guest house and a large cabin.
On the other hand, there are various oppurtunies for the youngsters if they gain knowledge on the practical subjects such as car mechanics and cookery, etc., they can try to attempt in their dream fields. such as Information technology like Google, Facebook plus Apple. For exemplify, some people who have the drastic knowledge in practical and they have settled in their life and also they are living a luxurious life, such as a gigantic flats, expensive cars and also advance technology .
To conclude, i belive that theoritical and practical subjects both are very important to construct the career of the youngsters in their respected and dream fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71178494369 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518115942029 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9120724671 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23969932148 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839938614803 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718896471201 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136271647371 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516850451639 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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