Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Which education system do you think is better? Why?
A section of society believes that male and female students should be taught separately, while few people prefer co-education for their children. In my opinion, co-education is always better choice as both the genders need to work together in every phase of life.
To begin with, we live in a world where both genders have equally important roles to play. Admittedly, if the students are taught separately based on gender, it would be difficult for them to understand the opposite gender. This could result in gender biases and may refrain them from approaching the opposite sex. Unequivocally, such behavioral impact that comes due to gender-based schooling proves detrimental for the child's development. For example, a girl in my neighborhood studied in girls institute from the beginning and she never learned how to talk with another sex, which made her less competent in jobs.
Another reason for opting mixed schooling is about learning to compete with opposite gender. When the schools are categorised based on gender, the school would incorporate the activities that interest the specific gender. However, in co-education, all the sports and activities are taught irrespective of gender. For example, girls would learn to play cricket while boys would learn stitching their shirt button on their own.
On the other hand, the critics of co-education can argue that male and female should be taught based on their capabilities and interests. According to them, there is no need for girls to learn boxing as it would be stressful and irrelevant to her. Similarly, there can be activities like embroidery and stitching which would be less useful for boys; still, they will need to learn them.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that modern schools should emphasize on co-education as they will know to adapt, compete and grow prosperously with the opposite gender. The world consists of both the genders and co-education helps to understand each other effectively. Although gender-based schooling facilitates certain benefits of focussed learning based on gender; but, we live in a highly competitive world where males and females stand together and work hand-in-hand. Thus, after close analysis, co-education is the best learning approach for today's generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to stitch'.
Suggestion: to stitch
... to play cricket while boys would learn stitching their shirt button on their own. On ...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to box'.
Suggestion: to box
...em, there is no need for girls to learn boxing as it would be stressful and irrelevant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, similarly, so, still, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34540389972 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86245008194 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543175487465 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8346422069 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.611111111 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106931729416 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387408413927 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301942283843 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687939854004 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241352775442 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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