Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
A section of society believes that male and female students should be taught separately, while few people prefer co-education for their children. Both groups have their own opinions to support the argument. However, in my opinion, co-education is always a better choice as both genders work together in every phase of life.
To begin with, we live in a world where both genders have equally important roles to play. Admittedly, if the male and female students are taught separately, they will only learn to work and mingle with the same gender. Such pupils might refrain themselves and show reluctance in working with the opposite sex. Unequivocally, such behavioral impact that comes due to gender-based schooling proves detrimental for the child's development. For example, a girl in my neighborhood studied in girls institute from the beginning and she never learned how to talk with another sex, which made her less competent in jobs.
Another reason for opting mixed schooling is about learning to compete with the opposite gender. When the schools are categorized based on gender, the school would incorporate the activities that interest the specific gender. However, in co-education, all the sports and activities are taught irrespective of gender. For example, girls would learn to play cricket while boys would learn to stitch their shirts button on their own.
On the other hand, the critics of co-education argue that males and females should be taught based on their capabilities and interests. According to them, there is no need for girls to learn boxing as it would be stressful for her. Similarly, there can be activities like embroidery and stitching which would be irrelevant to boys.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that modern schools should emphasize on co-education as they will know to adapt, compete and grow prosperously with the opposite gender. Although gender-based schooling fosters gender-focussed learning; but, we live in a highly competitive world where males and females stand together and work hand-in-hand. Thus, after close analysis, co-education is the best learning approach for today's generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to box'.
Suggestion: to box
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36390532544 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87569246558 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.235910404 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.722222222 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106030486144 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380332312618 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406769069418 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674631637468 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464063845618 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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