Some people think it is important to spend a lot of money on a wedding celebration, while others disagree. Describe both views and give your opinion
Many people are in favour of celebrating the occasions lavishly such as weddings, engagements. Conversely, it is often argued that it is more problematic than beneficial to organise a big fat wedding. This essay will examine both points of view and will state that overspending on marriage celebrations will be totally like throwing a good money.
On the one hand, an increasing number of people claim that investing a good amount of funds on wedding, it is to make it special and to be remembered. This is why people spend on extra ceremonies to create memories and cherish them. Take the example of bif fat wedding, for instance, the shoots, beautiful attires, videos and a location does not come free of cost. In additon to this, people also spend because they do not want their guest to be bored by simple parties nor embarassed.
Despite the issues related to overspending on a celebration, they can create some positive changes for this social event. One of the key ways this can happen is to the minimize the competition in the society which can help to reduce the funds spent on marriage. It is generally seen that poor people fall into a debt trap. For example, It can be seen that 50% of the people take a bank loan for their child wedding, later they suffer lifetime in repaying the loans. Another important factor can be seen that lot of food get wasted, many people die because of starvation.
Consequently, people can conserve money for their future use.
To recapitulate, while there are undoubtedly reasons for money can make marriages special; however, in my opinion, there are other certain ways of celebrating marriages in a simple way, instead of wasting food and other resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8595890411 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6885350259 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.738006954 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178548328665 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574673600822 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441122316285 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998527726236 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290546114934 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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