Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples
Although some human beings believe that having pets at home is beneficial for children, others think that it is risky and also unhygienic. In my opinion, I think keeping dogs and cats as pets can cause more harm to children.
On the one hand, some individuals consider keeping non-lethal animals such as dogs and cats as pets,which are advantageous for juveniles. This is because pets act as a companion to children when parents are not at home. They safeguard children against unknown people coming home, saving them from the risk of abduction.Take for instance, according to a recent survey, 25% of people in western countries depend on different type of dogs to protect their children, while they are away from home at work. Thus, pets help in protecting children in their early age from unknown people.
On the other hand, some people believe that pets are risky and unhygieneic for juveniles. They think this because of their wild nature and uncleanness characteristics. Being abducted by human beings, they can turn wild anytime and attack on children. Moreover, pets carry a lot of disease causing bacteria and other parasitic worms which an be quite dangerous for children. To illustrate, according to Vet Clinic in Boston university, children who are raised with pets have a probability of suffering from rabies twice as compared to other kids . These diseases can spread to children fast as they have low immunity power.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think keeping dogs and cats as pets at home can prove to be harmful to juveniles because of their cruel and unkind nature and unhygiene characteristics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04395604396 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75449782083 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6890415422 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292406659561 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114489070697 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610670637771 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200791365181 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054156405662 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.