Whether or not keeping pets at home is becoming increasingly controversial. Although some people believe that keeping pets is fine for their children, others think it can be dangerous and unhealthy for their child. This essay will discuss why having and keeping domestic animals has its benefits, but why to avoid having home-animals ultimately superior.
Keeping pets at home is acceptable behaviour and has a magical impact on the children. Being familiar with the world around, by touching and playing with them is one of the great advantages of having pets at home. Imagine, when a child getting amused with a puppy for hours, he or she can learn many natural habits from the animal just by watching and follow natural actions. It implies that it can be practical for families who opt to have animals in their homes.
On the other hand, there are families who against this and believe that keeping pets is dangerous and can cause many problems for their children. Whatever animals grow up mentally even by a professional trainer, they steel an animal, and they may exhibit sudden and wild reactions, so people shouldn’t surprise people. The recent research report, which published in John Hopkins University, shown that about 30 percent of children, in which families who keep pets, have beaten at least one time during their life. Therefore, maintaining animals at home doesn’t seem a logical decision.
Keeping or not keeping pets is a debatable issue. This essay discussed why caring home-animals have their own benefits, but why it can be risky and have a menacing impact on the children. In my opinion, despite some benefits, it may have, keeping pets can cause numerous vicious problems for the children, so the family should avoid this behaviour.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether or not keeping pets at home is becoming...
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Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not keeping pets at home is becoming increa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, at least, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04452054795 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59268741927 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558219178082 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7998755003 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231985939295 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939798567414 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833589460235 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161070098611 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566170792212 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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