Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
From the dawn of modern culture, there is always competition between genders, while some say naturally women are less competitive than men, others support the opposite side. Although men have more physical power than women, that does not means they are greater than women. I think that both genders are equal and I do not agree with the assertion that one gender stronger contender than others.
It is common today that both men and women are working at different levels in an organization to support gender equality. It has been seen in many demographic regions that men and women are competing against each other to gain the upper hand. That could be in politics to food competitions. This can be exemplified with three times Bangladesh Prime Minister is a female, although she has a good opposition of male candidates. And we can find Gordan Ramsay as an all-time greatest chef although, cooking is said to a women’s task in many parts of the world. However, it is better than some jobs should be completely done by genders who are responsible
Despite there is a strong competition between male and female, it is always good if some tasks are done by either one of the genders. Generally, women are considered as soft nature. Since they have a good hold on motherhood, they are good at understanding the problems of children. This is evidenced by 88% of the pediatricians in India are women. Thanks to the governments that they are encouraging the females on par with males
Even though there is a race between them in this competitive world, it won’t run without any one of them. According to me, gender is a word which differentiates the people by sex and there is no competition between them as in some cases men are good and in others, women have a stronghold. I believe, in the future that the race will be deprecated
Comments
The answer essay seems to be
The answer essay seems to be off topic .. they have asked that men seem to be biologically more competitive . They did not say more competent . Therefore, the essay needs to be developed on the lines of the psychology of competition .. not the physical competency .
The difference in the two words can be looked up in any of the standard dictionaries .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tely done by genders who are responsible Despite there is a strong competition be...
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...ncouraging the females on par with males Even though there is a race between them...
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...won't run without any one of them. According to me, gender is a word which differentiates ...
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... future that the race will be deprecated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, i think, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7625 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72997681996 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.603316647 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269557296092 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815641419198 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789668297276 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165819801464 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119258942659 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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