some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centres. while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution.
discuss both sides and give your opinion.
I need to score 7.5 bands in writing task so i just want to know where do i stand now and what are the areas that i should be focusing on in order to achieve my target. thanx in advance.
In modern era, as a result of upsurge in human population and development in urban areas, traffic clogging has become a serious problem being faced by citizens. banishing personal automobiles can be a remedy to this issue according to some people while others pursue this as an impractical approach. I am in consummate accord with this statement and will enlighten my point of view.
Government should adopt a pragmatic approach towards this issue, lowering the load of personal means of transport in large metropolis can prove to be beneficial to curb traffic problems. Government shall take some measures to draw peoples concerns towards public transport usage for travelling to downtown areas instead of personal automobiles. in addition to this, another strategy that can be adopted involves introducing safe, cleaner, cheaper and comfortable public transport system for public.
on the other hand, prohibition of personal vehicles has some drawback too; public transporting facilities in our country is not properly developed and neither do they provide comfortable travelling to passengers. moreover, public transporting system is overcrowded and unpleasant that provokes stressful and less creative environment for its passengers.
Furthermore, a downfall in automobiles percentage in main city area is accompanied with several advantages such as decrease in air pollution and global warming due to the reduction in emission of toxic gasses like carbon monoxide and nitrogen dioxide through vehicles that have hazardous effects on human health; as it is the precursor for various life threatning diseases. implementation of this will also curtail incidents of crimes and accidents in main city areas.
In concluding, there are both pros and cons of this strategy implementation but the number of advantages outweigh disadvantages and government should take these concerns into special consideration accompanied by taking serious steps towards decreasing the rotation of cars instead of restricting vehicles in downtown area in order to tackle this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64308681672 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04809583591 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623794212219 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2052755416 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.545454545 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181734898837 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691104442552 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508130096638 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950655554039 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525252052915 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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