Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is thought by some people that school teachers are totally responsible for our children’s education. Allegedly, pupils ought to receive not only knowledge related to educational subjects, but ethic rules about their behavior as members of society. To some extend I can agree with this statement, but there are also some details I want to clarify.
It is undisputable fact that children have been obtaining their first education (in Ukraine) for twelve years. They’ve been taught a lot of scientific and non-scientific disciplines including subjects related to medicine, art, geography. Contemporary teachers have been paying much attention also for the children’s relationship, the way they speaking each other, behave on the lessons et cetera. In my opinion, this is not enough to raise a good person.
The matter is that, young charges are very sensitive in their age, they adsorb behavior of their parents, siblings, teachers, older friends. Teachers could not be responsible for children’s actions, while they are beyond the school. That’s impossible.
To approve my meaning, I want give a clear example about the similar situation, happened with my friend Dmitri. He is a businessman and very rich. He has been so caught up with his job for the last 10 years, that he almost missed how he’s own daughter became an addict two years ago. When Dmitri’s daughter was 15, he sent her for studying to a very expansive college and never controlled her studying process. She felt herself free from parent’s supervision started her own “private life” with drugs. Thanks God she’s all right now, but who knows what could be further if Dmitri hadn’t become aware about this problem.
In conclusion, I’d like to say that education facilities are very important in our children’s life. Most parents are not able to spend their time to teach their kids scientific subjects, but they must learn them to be good citizens of our nation at any cost.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227053140097 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.147342995169 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0869565217391 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048309178744 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0869565217391 0.0437548338989 199% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0869565217391 0.122226691241 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0338164251208 0.0403226058552 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00728436971 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289855072464 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0024154589372 0.00163938923432 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.0555555555556 0.0861772015684 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.012077294686 0.021408717616 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00966183574879 0.011925033212 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2011.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26479750779 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373831775701 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292834890966 0.28420135186 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224299065421 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14953271028 0.137316102897 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00728436971 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.037074148 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660436137072 0.56093040696 118% => OK
Word variations: 83.1443552245 60.7387585426 137% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8333333333 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1243903007 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.722222222 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.814263465372 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.1168224299 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.23076923077 1.69124875643 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278308799557 0.332605444948 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0713038901973 0.102741220458 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0565684314026 0.0668466124924 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484501861114 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13612344374 0.148594505496 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096384038883 0.134430193775 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395762431836 0.0742795772207 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.184481296519 0.324371583561 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0502146653908 0.0638462369009 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171016214653 0.228012699653 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315985200029 0.058150111329 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.