Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.
Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Children are sensitive in their childhood and they spend most of the time with their parents. Children will follow the footsteps of their parents, however, once they start attending a school they will start learning from teachers and friends. Parents are the first person who will be teaching more than their teachers although, teachers will be teaching how to read write and so many things in a real society and both of them have equal importance in their life.
On one hand, there are parents they will teach basic things in everyday life which is very important in their first stage and they will be following the same thing throughout their life. At home, the environment should be peace and quiet so that they will grow up in a healthy atmosphere. For instance, if the parents maintain peace and love inside the home then children will be loving and caring in their life and will become a good member in the society. But, if the parents are engaged in fighting and if they are not giving enough time to their children then this will affect children mind negatively.
On the other hand, even in the school they will be polite and behave well if they are taught and grown up in a healthy environment with their friends and teachers. For example, when teachers are polite even children will be polite and helpful but if teachers are cruel to them then they will learn to be cruel so, it is very important that teachers are good to their students. However, in the school they will learn more about working together in a team which are essential part for a child to be a good member.
As a whole, parents and teacher possess equal role to make the child a better citizen of society. It is very difficult to choose one particular person because both have an equal role in teaching them about good and bad for them and how to be a good citizen of society
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...love inside the home then children will be loving and caring in their life and will becom...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at teachers are good to their students. However, in the school they will learn m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54029850746 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24045710258 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432835820896 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1639003197 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188481090655 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894041373753 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405915286989 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13150671024 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00645793883804 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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