Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss what is your opinion?
It is believed that the majority of people are making a contribution to the community by giving sufficiently taxes obligation, while others think that residents should perform more duties. From my perspective, I support the latter view. In the following essay, I will present reasons to demonstrate this opinion.
On the one hand, there is an abundance of origins why fulfilling tax onus is a help to society and in all countries, the tax system is the main resource of the national budget which carried out in a variety of ways. In particular, individuals spend the amount of money on any items, which means they are paying the levy to the authority due to that expense is included tax. Hence, the more products they buy, the more taxes they contribute to the public funding. As a result, the government could use this budget to allocate for related fields such as education, infrastructure, and environmental protection and in turn, serve residents and the community. Without the vital provision, the state would be failed to thrive because of the lack of the public budget and thus, the government has to find another income, consisting of exploitation of the natural resources and even, borrowing a sum of money from foreign nations.
On the other hand, in spite of the essential role of the tax system, becoming a good member of society means doing more duties. Firstly, individual and the community would reap certainly benefits from a person who has a job and does not wrongdoings owing to the heavy burden of a state may be split as well as the society might be in peace. Secondly, the standing of a nation in the international arena would be promoted through the behavior of every citizen, which means a prospering society or not will depend on each person.
In conclusion, it seems to me that contributing to the community could be performed through a large number of manners including fulfilling tax obligations. Therefore, the state should enact suitable policies to encourage its citizens bearing more duties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03812316716 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12118533352 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565982404692 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.637649123 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.8 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.6 7.06120827912 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194227916803 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745840095595 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563779185476 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122044580601 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268337791298 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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