some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
People may think the one who settles for a job earlier on will obtain better career satisfaction than the one who likes switching job one to another. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement.
After graduating from school, everyone is an eagle to find a steady job, unfortunately, most of the people get the occupation does not relate to their specialism. Plus, many young people start boring work such as desk jobs, receptionists, office staffs,… There are no opportunities to improve skills, broaden knowledge or even no chance to promote. Lots of research show that most people in the workforce are not happy with the current jobs. Staffs feel bored and unmotivated whilst doing the same agendas every single day. Hence, having a job and sticking with it in early career is not a good idea.
In addition, changing a job is able to bring many benefits to employees. Firstly, the job seeker can try their hands in many different fields, thus, new skills are gained, knowledge is expanded and the job hopper would find what suit them best. Secondly, people who switch job regularly allowed to experience various working environments and spread their social network connection. Last but not least, employees that dare to leave current jobs to follow the ambitions and dreams will be more passionate and success in the future.
Every accomplishment starts with the decision to try. Therefore, I believe people who want to settle down early could not have a better career than the one who willing to change and make difference.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
... desk jobs, receptionists, office staffs,… There are no opportunities to improve s...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
..., the job seeker can try their hands in many different fields, thus, new skills are gained, kn...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'experiencing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: experiencing
...people who switch job regularly allowed to experience various working environments and spread...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00772200772 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66048101672 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656370656371 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8718095238 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313295997819 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934989277563 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737595681715 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186256647792 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395032675866 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.