Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, every individual wants to know the news about the things happening around the world. Some people claim that the radio is the good device to receive the information, while others aver that Television is better option than Radio. Each have their own importance and this essay will discuss them and give my opinion.
There are many reasons why people argue that radio is best source to receive the news. Firstly, it is a portable device and easy to carry anywhere without risk. For example, if any tourist wants to know updates about the particular area then he can just tune to his local radio channel. Secondly, in recent inventions, it is embedded into many electronic devices such as mobiles, cars and many others. However, there is also a drawback with this device which is that this instrument delivers only audio, so due to lack this feature Television ranks higher than Radio.
Today, Television is widely accepted by everyone with open hands across the world. Firstly, Television has more impact on human’s mind when compared to radio, the reason is that we can watch while we here. For instance listening to news about sports while we watch the same will register quickly in our mind when compared to just hearing. Another reason is that , we can watch live telecast of programs. For example, as Indians are cricket lovers, they watch every match in lie streaming. For instance, Oath taking ceremony of Prime Minister of any country can be seen with visuals from anywhere in the world.
To put in nut shell, I pen down that, even though there are many reasons for people choosing radio as a best source of delivering information, TV is the best option for it as we can enjoy both audio and video at a time
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77333333333 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35207031008 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593333333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1918358845 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245803252438 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740871846949 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682868497746 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156892588635 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647925514132 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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