Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Celebrations are a way of spreading and sharing happiness. Many people believe that hosting parties on special occasions is merely throwing money lavishly while others feel that these occasions are important for a person and people that live around. as it embarks a specific milestone achieved. I personally support the latter. This essay will discuss both views.
Many event in a person's life embarks the achievement of the specific goal. When people reach these goals they find it worth celebrating the sucess for happiness with their near and dear ones. Marriage, for example, is a widely celebrated event because this occasion comes once in a lifetime. Most people accumulate funds to celebrate it in the utmost grander and lively way possible.
In addition, there are other important events that families celebrate like the first birthday of a child, graduation from university or college. Though, people do not spend as much as these events as a marriage ceremony but to each family or individual it means something special.
However, when it comes to the cost there could be a number of unwanted spendings like hiring a venue to host the event, event planners to decorate the venue, caterer and waiters to cook and serve food respectively, special lightings, sending out invitations to guests, reserving hotels for guest accommodations etc. But with a little planning a lot of these expenses can be eliminated and still celebrate with the feeling of a festival.
To summarise, I believe some events are once in a lifetime occasions and they should be celebrated wholeheartedly while keeping the extra expenditure in mind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...r a person and people that live around. as it embarks a specific milestone achieve...
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Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r a person and people that live around. as it embarks a specific milestone achieve...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun event seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many events'.
Suggestion: Many events
...This essay will discuss both views. Many event in a persons life embarks the achieveme...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...discuss both views. Many event in a persons life embarks the achievement of the spe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19245283019 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79647848532 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1273321343 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184827656536 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574461325211 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454695962723 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992358876498 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479353681917 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.