Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about the noise restriction, some people believe that they have the right to make as much noise as they like while others think that government should have an indispensable measures to lessen noise. In my point of view, I agree with the idea that the noise should be limited in certain level.
On one hand, there are several reasons why people tend to creat as much noise as they want. Firstly, making noise helps people feel more comfortable and relaxed after hard – working day. Since stressed and burden of work are popular for people in daily life, turning the volume louder to enjoy their favorite song allowing them relaxing and getting freedom. In addition, people seems to consider noise as a part of life as industrialization and mordenization process. For example, people are often familiar with traffic noise, factories noise. Therefore, it is no need to dwindle noise in our life.
On the other hand, some people belive that government should control noise produced because of some reasons. First all of, noise produced can dramatically affect to people’s health. Listening to a louder noise constantly in a living place can cause problems such as ears disease, headaches and the like. Furthermore, noise can disturb people’s work and study. For instant, a university student can not concentrate to his exam because of noise surrounding him. As a result, he may get bad result at the exam.
In conclusion, although creating noise can help people feel relaxed when they get stressed, I more agree that government should apply some essential measures to reduce the noise to protect our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06985294118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66155903902 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5844069079 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328535729994 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104395754163 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100108121611 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211682360891 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965991580094 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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