Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs.
To what extent do you agree ?
These days many people travel abroad for work, business or education purposes. For most of them, they have very little cultural experience of the foreign land they are landing into. It is consider by some people that it is better for individuals to mould themselves into the local customs and practices of the new place. I completely agree with this notion, as it helps travelers to get good friends and avoid breaking rules as well.
Firstly, a major benefit of learning local traditions and practices is that it helps the person accustomed to its new society. As for many new-comers adapting to new customs may seem a difficult task, learning about local practices can help them unravel such problems. A good example would be participating in society gatherings and social functions; this will not only them to learn about local practices but also help them in building good relations with the society. On the other hand, if a person keep himself away from such things, locals will dintant themselves from him/her. Therefore, it is crucial to comprehend local traditions of the society for greater adaptability in the society.
Secondly, learning customs and rules of a new country is also very important from travelers prospectus. This is because, many countries have different laws according to their local cultures and habits. For instance, in gulf counties, it is consider illegal to consume alcohol without a valid permit. A person who is unaware of such rules may end up in jail or paying heavy penalties for not abiding the law. Hence, learning about the customs of different culture help in a hassle free experience in the country.
To sum up, adapting into local traditions and customs is beneficial for a person who is travelling, as it will help him/her to become a part of society and get familiar with the rules of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...reign land they are landing into. It is consider by some people that it is better for in...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
.... For instance, in gulf counties, it is consider illegal to consume alcohol without a va...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6398234892 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525806451613 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8663285987 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247805801755 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879787219204 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500824209218 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158763874998 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466256804038 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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