Emancipation and the empowerment of women are one of the important needs of the 21st century. While people agree to the fact that women should be given equal opportunity to work and excel in their careers, some believe that women should be limited to taking care of the house and children. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the foremost reason why women should be given equal possibilities in the workplace.
Women possess a great quality of tolerance and patience which can be very to very beneficial to a workplace. An educated woman can give a better upbringing and a good future for her offsprings. She can inspire and help other women who are suppressed in her comfort zone. They should be given proper motivation to achieve their dreams. She can be a great asset to society and to the family.
India has as many women as men and in the future economic growth of the country cannot progress while denying women their rights and opportunities. Illiteracy and the suppression of women are some of the most relevant reasons why India is not developing fast enough. No country can progress if it isolates 50% of its population. For a bright and good future for the country, It is necessary to bring women force into the workplace.
In conclusion, no woman is no less than a man in any field. In my opinion, women should be given equal opportunities in the workplace.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73029045643 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72842953898 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526970954357 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2569854899 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4285714286 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397773888333 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130195580647 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163822765771 0.0667982634062 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242376698163 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161598772826 0.056905535591 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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