Ways of mastering courses have become a contentious topic in recent times. Despite majority of people argue that individuals can benefit from online courses , other believe teacher led classes are vitially important. I would argue that ------ and this essay will examine both sides.
On the one hand, online courses can be beneficial in innumerable ways. One of the primary advantage is that it is individual oriented consequently it is more convenient for many. Students are able to focus on some subjects more or review them in a few seconds depending on knowledge and necessity. Quick learners, for example, can complete tasks fast and continue learning other subjects hense they will enjoy learning a lot. Further and more importantly, they can be mastered at different times using computers therefore their work/life balance will be effected in a positive way. Women especially who have nine to five job will benefit distance learning courses after all houseworks are completed. For instance, a study by Aksara University in 2018 revealed that two thousand women, over 50 years old, graduated from university by attending goverment subsidised online education programmes during five years.
On the other hand, many individuals insist on having traditional education because of two primary causes. To begin with, children can concentrate more when lecture is teacher led. Online games and social sites such as Facebook and Instagram can be very distructive while studying. A guardian will force them focus on subjects in a period. They also cannot discriminate between courses hence they should not study without a guardian or parents. Internet is considered as a vital source for studies in many cases; however they can be viction of online criminals. For example, a survey by Goverment of Gree in 2017 reported that 90% of correspondents prefer traditional education given the fact that privacy and online abusement are two primary concerns for teenagers there.
In my opinion, I would argue that providing online education is better since it is less affluent. Construction of many eduactional buildings and monthly wages of many instructors cost a lot. If goverments had provided only online education, they would have saved many million dollars.
By way of conclusion, although teacher led classes are prefered by many, I would contend that online education can bring countless positive elements into individuals' lives since it is cost effective and it doesn not depend on time and location.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ividuals can benefit from online courses , other believe teacher led classes are v...
^^
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...heir work/life balance will be effected in a positive way. Women especially who have nine to five...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 622, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
... Women especially who have nine to five job will benefit distance learning courses ...
^^^
Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... doesn not depend on time and location.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, after all, for example, for instance, such as, in many cases, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33838383838 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77583500378 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8606236577 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52380952381 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18942282768 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522468569596 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391882079997 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102460654813 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233115666898 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.