Recently it is seen that cities are more populated due to moving young people from smaller towns. As a result senior citizen are mostly residing in rural areas. Overall this geographical move is basically due to better living standared and more leisure facilities for youth in major cities. This essay will discuss reasons and solutions for this growing issue.
Firstly, there is an ample evidence that younger population is growing in larger cities due to more job oppertunitie . This is the reason that older population has to reside in smaller towns. In a survey conducted in 2017 in Canada statistics showed that 70 percent of young people moved to toronto due to their job recruitment in 2016. This issue can be overcomed by promoting new buisnesses and development in countryside. As a consequence , youth and their growing families will stay in rural area without leaving their older parents alone.
Secondly, more leisure activities and recreational places in bigger cities attract youth. It is seen that more amuesment parks and facilitis attract youth to populated cities. This huge problem can be overcome by building natural recreational places and parks in rural area. Government can promote tourisim places in smaller communities. This will keep younger people to stay in countryside.
To coclude from the reasons and solutions discussed above, if more attractions and oppertunities are given, youth are more vulnerable to stay in countryside close to their parents. It is predicted that this will be helpful for older population to enjoy their rest of life with their growing families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23346303502 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74567058046 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533073929961 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1991504974 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0625 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200341907151 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700243953943 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497318515872 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125757020075 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308374435301 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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