Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism should be developed in the future. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or o negative development?
In recent time, it is believed that traveling to the outer space are becoming more simple than some last decades due to the booming of the universal industry. This following essay aimed to examine the major reasons for this phenomenon and present my opinion on whether this development is negative.
On the one hand, human beings can reap enormous benefits from the exploitation of space travel. Firstly, by reaching the stars, holidaymakers would have the chance to not only gain insight into the mysterious universe and broaden their horizons but also immerse themselves in new experiences they have never had before. A typical example is that they could know what it feels like to wear space suits, eat vacuum-packed food and live in zero gravity condition. Another positive change would be this new industry would be paved the way for the search of our new homeland. There is little room for doubt that mankind is struggling against the detrimental impacts of overpopulation and utilization excessively the natural resources might give us a spark of hope into the sector.
On the other hand, despite its benefits, I believe that the drawbacks of space tourism should also not be forgotten. To begin with, tours in the cosmos require a substantial amount of investment from the state, which means the national budget must be allocated for activities of this service such as building space crafts or conducting test flights. Such a policy may be face opposition from the majority of people owing to this amount of money could be used for other fields instead. Not to mention that, given the tremendous cost, journeys to outer space would be affordable to only wealthy people, therefore, widening the gap between the rich and the poor, which is a core reason leading to the chaos of the community. Last but not least, the universal exploration might pose a threat to travelers since there have been cases of astronauts having their lives claimed during a space voyage.
In conclusion, it seems to me that universe travel generates the demerits than its optimistic. Hence, the government should enact policies to encourage people to use conventional tourism services but not completely inhibit journeys to space due to its particular advantages.
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also, but, first, firstly, hence, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07008086253 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68680564866 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611859838275 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7765312552 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.357142857 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37264524491 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110300766958 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592657179699 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198743096656 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711829471307 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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