Telecommuting refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting?
The advancement in technology has greatly impacted the conventional way of life, even sprouting to working places. In many developed countries, It is prevalent in many companies that the employees are working at home instead of going to the office as they can make use of state-of-the-art technology, wherever they are, to access the office resources and communicate with other peoples. This decoupling between workers and offices is known as telecommuting. In my opinion, it can have positive influences on society in term of economic and familial aspects.
To start with the economic aspect, this trend is more cost effective as it not only saves the cost of transportation from employees, but also diminishes the expenditure on renting office from employers, resulting to win-win situations among the employers and employees. In addition, reducing rental cost is one thing, freeing more space is another. Lacking of Land resource is a norm in many big cities. It is the telecommuting that allows company to free up more space to other businesses. As the number of business increases, so do the economy growth.
Another positive influence is that it can reinforce the family relationship, especially to the families in which both father and mother are working class. In many metropolises, it is common phenomenon that the parent cannot allocate much time on their child. Specially thank to the telecommuting, these parents can now have more time putting on their child as they no longer need time for transportation. Taking HK as an example, commuting usually costs 2 hours, the time already enough to bring the children to park.
All in all, telecommuting is the new form and modern way of working and it comes with many beneficial impacts to society. It is high time we should further promote this changes to all companies so everyone can enjoy the advantages.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'in addition', 'in my opinion', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256637168142 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.147492625369 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.094395280236 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047197640118 0.0501214627716 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0442477876106 0.0437548338989 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126843657817 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0501474926254 0.0403226058552 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00641517234 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0383480825959 0.0326793684256 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00294985250737 0.00163938923432 180% => OK
Determiners: 0.094395280236 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0206489675516 0.021408717616 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00294985250737 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1870.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11111111111 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375816993464 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303921568627 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209150326797 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143790849673 0.137316102897 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00641517234 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 67.2259242047 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6279463409 49.517814964 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.814263465372 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 50.7921568627 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.81481481481 1.69124875643 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398529603716 0.332605444948 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0988430755321 0.102741220458 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0592999928749 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531155751727 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163604640538 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154800278869 0.134430193775 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061254477892 0.0742795772207 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362892827015 0.324371583561 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0554760337908 0.0638462369009 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270671484669 0.228012699653 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510317273022 0.058150111329 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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