There are many different types of music in the world today. Why we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
In recent times, a variety of music is heard across the globe. Undoubtedly, every kind of music is refreshing to mind and the body. Although each type has its significance and value, I believe traditional music should be valued more and efforts should be made to pass it to the next generation. However, as international music does not have similar advantages for the community and should not be protected.
To begin with, traditional music is the heart and soul of the nation. Admittedly, it reminds the generation of their origin and existence. Without qualms, such music is unique in itself and talks about the way of living as well as cultural practices followed by their ancestors in the past. Consequently, if this music is not preserved, it means that abundant knowledge and customs of rich generations are lost. For example, qawwali is traditional Sufi music, which is remembered even today because of the work and literature maintained by ethnic people.
Secondly, international music is a hybrid version of different pieces of music and does not reflect any culture. Unequivocally, it does not show the cultural resemblance of a particular society. Thus, efforts for its conservation seems to bear no fruits in human development.
Finally, local songs and folk music is a rare combination, which is not found everywhere. In other words, this composition is a result of ethnic lifestyle and admiration towards the native language. definitely, such a unique combination does not come easily. Hence, indigenous music should be truly preserved.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that local music has greater importance than international music as it is the prestigious fruit of native people and their customs. Moreover, efforts should definitely be made to protect this rich heritage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25605536332 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00398238249 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8825243755 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393297683312 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120046453525 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985928217566 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216281813506 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520176842549 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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