There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development
Modern technology has changed our way of thinking. Easy and cheaper access of machines let people work in more nice and smooth manner. The positive or negative development depends on the nature of work or study that a person or a student is carrying out.
For example, if a university student like to enroll him/herself in some course which is conducting in abroad, the online technology makes it quite easier for that student to register in that course while sitting home through distance learning course. The course fee, material and lectures can be obtained through webinars. However, distance learning cannot be as fruitful as face-to-face learning as this gives the opportunity to student to ask the question right on the moment whereas webinar session lacks this facility. In addition to that those students who are home sick and not want to leave their family for studying abroad may have the same opportunity to take the online courses. However, this may lead the students in a lack of confidence to present him/herself in the audience. Though distance learning is always good for those who cannot afford to study abroad or have some other reasons but want to accelerate themselves in their own profession.
On the other hand, people who work from home are very happy to receive this technology and welcome every step of technology that help them to improve their work while sitting home. For instance, A person would like to work for extra hours besides the normal office working hours to feed the extra mouths of his family, their are many international companies who provide this opportunity for people to work from their home stations for these companies and against their work they provide wages to these employees. The employees just need to arrange a computer to get a work done which considers cheaper investment to earn extra money. However, a little effort is require from these people but there is a side effect of losing the peace and happiness of their lives and start putting themselves in an anxiety and in a greed to earn more money resulting spending all these money on their own medical to recover for their health.
It is true that to stay good in this world extra money has become the necessity of everyone's life but compromising over the health and family gathering is unbearable. Therefore, it is the liability of every person to not to throw themselves in the dust of work but other things are also important in life such as family because once this time is gone can never be brought back and in the end nothing would left but the regret.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to course'
Suggestion: to course
... sitting home through distance learning course. The course fee, material and lectures ...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
...his gives the opportunity to student to ask the question right on the moment whereas webinar ses...
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Line 3, column 860, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ways good for those who cannot afford to study abroad or have some other reasons ...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...to feed the extra mouths of his family, their are many international companies who pr...
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Line 5, column 663, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...xtra money. However, a little effort is require from these people but there is a side e...
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Line 5, column 865, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
... earn more money resulting spending all these money on their own medical to recover for the...
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Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...ought back and in the end nothing would left but the regret.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83484162896 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48554820476 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495475113122 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7367739427 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.466666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4666666667 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242283285143 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07831459045 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623425941115 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147297641655 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877014406802 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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