These days, people work in more than one job and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly popular to have more jobs and go into new career many times. However, some sociologists claim that this trend not only has a great deal of advantages but also many disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of this phenomenon and offer my opinion.
Let us start by looking at the benefits of having a supplementary job and changing a calling. One of the main positives of having more jobs is a larger income. People with at least two jobs tend to earn twice as much as they would if they had sole job because they work long hours a week. As a result, they can afford a wider range of things such as a house, car and more holidays overseas. One of the major advantages of altering a career is trying oneself in various fields. In other words, since they go into a new profession several times, they are more likely to find their dream job and get more job satisfaction. After considering these drawbacks, it is obvious having extra job and varying a career repeatedly can be problematic.
On the other hand, this has plenty of disadvantages. First of all, having additional jobs often leads to an excessive amount of stress. Take waiters for example. Waiters, who work in various restaurants, usually suffer from stress, since they hardly have spare time to relax and unwind stress. If they keep this way for a long period of time, they eventually get stressed out and become sick. Secondly, changing a career a few times can result in lack of promotion. What I mean by this is that as they change a career too frequently, workers tend to miss out the opportunity to get promoted and therefore get a higher salary. If they stayed in single place for longer, they would move into management and have a higher income. After analyzing these benefits, it is clear that both having more than one employment and changing a career is advantageous.
All things considered, even though there are a lot of positives in possessing another job and going into a new occupation repeatedly, I think that above-mentioned drawbacks easily overweigh all advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for example, i mean, i think, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7472826087 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75100809629 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3995768206 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.35 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.95 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287275643322 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836877823524 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052759794658 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147843525603 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802893237554 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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