‘In today’s world, some prefer online courses whereas others prefer classroom teaching’
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Education is the key to success. It is commonly believed that online courses are a great source of learning whereas others support going to school. According to me, with the advancement of technology and the internet, online tutorials have enhanced themselves to a great extent and also offers huge benefits with regards to classroom learning. Moreover, this opinion varies from person to person. This essay will discuss both the thoughts.
On one hand, in modern society, online learning has drastically increased its importance than in the past. Firstly, it is the most convenient way of gaining knowledge and education. Secondly, there are many rural areas which are still deprived of a good education system and an amazing mentor. Thus, as the internet has reached each and every corner of the world, it can surely motivate others to learn with the help of it. For example, a recent study by “The Education Authority” made a succinct comparison between the popularity of online classes versus the classroom learning which showed that since 2011 there is an ample increase in online learning due to the fact that the internet is widely available. Lastly, using online tutorial one can even listen to a lecture from a foreign university and widen the scope of learning. Online classes can save a lot of time and money with regards to transportation cost and school fee. Moreover, one can watch the lectures multiple times at their ease. Hence, this type of learning is great for the working class people who do not have time to attend classroom training.
On the other hand, classroom learning is imperative to students, most importantly, they are the place where one can collaborate with his or her friend circle. Furthermore, they can perform group activities and in turn, can learn from each other. There are various activities or experiments which help enhance the practical knowledge which can only be performed in universities or schools. Take, for instance, the chemistry experiment requires various chemicals, equipment, and guidance from a teacher which is definitely not possible using online classes. Also, the teachers get to know better about the capability and strengths of different student and can also help enhance them by giving feedbacks.
To conclude, both sides have their own advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, classroom teaching is the best possible way a child can learn and enhance its knowledge, however, I also believe online tutorials or classes can help bridge the gap between the rural and the urban areas related to the education system and it can also help the people who are employed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...whereas others support going to school. According to me, with the advancement of technology and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16009280742 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71070970288 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53596287703 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1310497593 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.904761905 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5238095238 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139077632179 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383400068141 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398970446087 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866398433672 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324957732352 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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