Today tourism is one of the world’s biggest industries and many poorer countries are depending more and more on tourism for their economy.
What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a large number of tourists visiting a country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nature abundance is the gift given by the god. Many of the countries have been sustaining their economy on tourism industry, because of it’s natural aesthetics. Today, many of the developing countries are depending solely on tourism sector. This industry has more advantages over disadvantages, particularly for poorer nations.
It is irrefutable that tourists bring prosperity in terms of money not only to the local businessmen but also for the government. For instance, Thailand is the country where most of the businesses are depending on the influx of tourists. Moreover, the Thai government also gathers decent currency by providing comprehensive services to the tourist such as public toilets, museum fees, and via the toll taxes. Secondly, Thai localites are also learning different cultures and technologies around the world which help them to live high standard life. For instance, Most taxi drivers are using the Uber application which facilitates them to pick their potential customers at the arrival itself. Additionally, Some of the citizens also influenced by western cultures, which taught them how to increase outer demeanor through the western fashions.
There are negligible dark sides of the tourism industry like some of the non-social being would hurt the emotions of the countrymen’s by performing malice activities. To exemplify, Malaysian society is certainly surprised by several anti-social activities performed by the foreigners like late night parties, unbearable behaviour of the tourists to their bartenders. Secondly, a large inflow of the foreigners can create chaotic condition at particular place. For example, Bali is the country where most people want to visit in the spring season so it is nearly impossible for the government as well as for the local businessmen to provide accurate services. Due to, this most tourists would not prefer to visit the place next time in their lifespan.
To conclude, I can say that by contemplating both the pros and cons of the tourism industry. If tourism is the single source to strengthen the nation’s economy then all the unfavourable conditions would be pardonable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46865671642 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02242306963 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608955223881 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7718303782 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.764705882 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30909559539 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877707057966 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784110222356 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181961146617 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116080577879 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.