Topic: Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In twenty-first century, we are in digital age where the time of technology bloom. In order to help people to communicate on the move, some innovative kinds of communications has been invented. Two of them are email and messaging which are becoming more and more ubiquitous and indispensable. However, decreasing the amount of time people hang out with their friends is its drawback. I believe the advantages will overshadow all of the disadvantages.
To start with, these advanced contact method helped people a lot in communicating. People find it interesting to talk to their friends in a new way. These days, people are busy on their works and don’t have much leisure time. In that case, texting is a perfect choice when they want to talk or confide. If there is something go wrong in the contract, the secretary can contact constantly to their boss by using a social network account. Furthermore, some introverts will have troubles when communicate face-to-face to another. To get rid of these obstacles, social network will help them. Being behind a phone screen or a computer will make them not to be as clumsy as in real life.
In my view, using these modern method to contact can help us communicate with people who live in another countries or continents. It can also expand our “friend-circle” and bring us more interesting friends. Some distant relatives who we hardly meet can call video with us in some special occasions. Like my aunt, on my grandmother’s birthday, because she could not come back home in time, she decided to call back to home by using Facebook. Not only Facebook but also Skype, Zalo, Viber, etc. can do the same thing.
As you can see, these kinds of social network is very convenient in their own way. To include, I think the advantages of them completely outweigh the disadvantages. The thing is we need to know how to make use of it and manage to restrict its negative effects.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... believe the advantages will overshadow all of the disadvantages. To start with, these ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a new way" with adverb for "new"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...it interesting to talk to their friends in a new way. These days, people are busy on their w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, i think, in my view, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84894259819 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91513390382 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570996978852 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3321128148 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.9545454545 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0454545455 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1868088767 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516422988219 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053165438094 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113036037797 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378752560638 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... believe the advantages will overshadow all of the disadvantages. To start with, these ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a new way" with adverb for "new"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...it interesting to talk to their friends in a new way. These days, people are busy on their w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, i think, in my view, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84894259819 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91513390382 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570996978852 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3321128148 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.9545454545 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0454545455 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1868088767 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516422988219 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053165438094 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113036037797 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378752560638 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.