Is tourism in less developed countries advantage or disadvantage? Discuss your views and give your opinion.
In today’s world, it is a point of contention whether tourism is beneficial or not. While there are certaily valid arguments to claim that tourism is detrimental to a great extent, yet I still believe that the tourism industry has brought significant changes to our lives. Therefore in this essay, the primary reasons associated with this trend will be discussed and focused on.
To begin with, one point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that the industry enhances cultur clashes. Without a doubt, exposing to Western culture, for instance, people tend to make more sense of cultural differences and it enables them to make an improvement in their connections, in particular, for business purposes and social skills. Thus, this makes it clear that holidaymaking industry is the backbone of every countries in the globe to revolutionise the way they business and live.
Further and even more importantly, though, this is particularly so given the fact that such businesses are correlated strongly with the development and increase the number of job oppurtunities, especially when it comes to developing countries. Although such industries sometimes have adverse impact upon the flora and fauna undeliberately or even deliberately, ultimately, it might lead to address and boost the economic growth and development of thirld world countries. After analysing this, it should be taken into account that holidaymakers has often become an integral part of underdeveloped nations.
Overall, I once again reaffirm my sentiment that even though tourism has a great deal of demerits, there are many and various reasons to support and take full advantages of holidaymaking which do outweigh its drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in particular, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38007380074 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05451260413 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3426598566 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.8 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0875169888978 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322305070783 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234201346649 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513213260152 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239890281383 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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