Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their
employees to the countryside.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
A solution to traffic and accommodation can be shifting of large companies, factories and their workers to the countryside,
In my opinion, this is not the best solution to the problem as other effective options are available.
To begin with, movement of factories and substantial population will destroy the essence of the countryside. Needless to say, migration of this huge scale would affect the natural beauty of the countryside. Moreover, agricultural land will be compromised in order to accommodate this movement, hence production of crops will suffer. Furthermore, it is an enormous task to provide all the facilities for companies and factories to operate. For instance, power supply to countryside is limited because of less demand and transmission lines are laid according to the demands. In case of movement of factories and companies, laying of new transmission line will be required which is quite expensive. Therefore,
it is not a wise decision to shift the industries to countryside.
However, traffic congestion and accommodation issues are a matter of grave concern but there are solutions to it.For example, to ease the traffic congestion in the city, a study and the implementation of transportation management can be effective. It can include the construction of more bridges, flyovers or underpasses, as well as development of different modes of transportation. Similarly, housing issues can be solved by construction of multi storey buidlings,
in case of scarcity of land in urban cities. For example, Japan is continuously working on projects which increases the capacity of accommodation vertically because of less available land.
In conclusion, there are several better ways to solve the housing and traffic issues rather than shifting of factories and their workers to countryside which will generate more complicated issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51916376307 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28284391752 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6528580015 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196750890838 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654377514693 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523963522019 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917030014787 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516886376663 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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