The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Exhausted carbon-di-oxide emission led to global warming. We live in an age where many of family owning personal cars at least two than past a decade. Due to which it releases heavy smoke pollution causing environmental hazard. Therefore, it is vital to educate people to high use public transportation. In this essay, let us examine some meaningful reasons.
To begin with, it is highly important to educate people to leverage public transportation for personal use as well. Because due to the increased number of cars exhausting smoke pollution and traffic that results impure oxygen to breath and causing health issues. In other words, a recent research by Harward University, London says vehicle releases high carbon-di-oxide leading to various health issues such as passive cancer. Not only that, another research from environment science department warned that due to drastic smoke emission has led to a whole in the ozone layer and Global warming. Thus, it is vital to swift our mode of transportation.
On the other hand, it is also, government duty to establish a cheap, flexible and comfortable bus service to the people to use. Furthermore, the road authority should impose very high cost to use the car. For example, high road tax, road toll service, parking charge, fuel price etc,. Therefore, naturally people would rely on using government transportation it would obvious not only brings high revenue to the government but also curb environmental damage.
In conclusion, while we try to educate people to benefit using government transportation to restrict the increasing number of using personal cars causing high pollution. But it is very important that the government offers sophisticated and flexible transportations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3795620438 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07000912776 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6729935088 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224715939666 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720814343819 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780396609458 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152713573422 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442872098666 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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